Esther Sylvester

You know you're a nerd when you get mad at someone for misquoting Monty Python and the Holy Grail , and then proceed to vocalize the correct wording.

Hello Sensei! Gosh, I love your username. Welcome to YWS! It's really nice here, and I hope you use it for all it's worth. Have you introduced yourself at the ...

That is interesting, Nate! The site has changed a lot since then, though. I like writing short stories best. It gives you the chance to develop a plot and characters ...

Hi there! This review is going to be short but I hope it helps you any. This story does make the reader interested in what will happen next, but it ...

Hello Soccer! I am Esther Sylvester and I shall be reviewing your piece today! Let's get down to it. I will do the painful nitpicks first! (I'm reviewing this as ...

(EDIT: Oh gosh, so sorry. I messed up your MC's gender. I called him a girl and kind of went with it. Hopefully you'll understand my horrible use of the ...

Hi Lydia! (I take it that's your name.) Welcome to YWS. It's a pleasure to have you here. Now, I don't know much about poetry, so bare with me here. ...

Hi there! I am Esther and I shall be reviewing your pieces today. Interesting idea; telling stories using specific writing devices instead of blending them up. I liked them all. ...

Hi there! My name is Esther and I shall be reviewing you (two?)today. Nice, interesting play concept. I know there are zombie plays out there but I haven't read any ...

Christopher Loch The smell of coffee and freshly baked bread filled the small diner. Christopher tapped his fingers absently on the old wooden table that sat in the corner of ...

I would like to join, please! Question: are there people out there with vampirism that actually attack humans for their blood? I haven't seen any yet, I think. Here is ...

Hey Rhani! It's a pleasure to have you on YWS! My name is Esther. So you're from Australia? That's so cool! I've always found the continent interesting. Do you enjoy ...

This was a short but sweet piece, I enjoyed it. However, if you don't care if we liked it or not, why did you post it on here? This is ...

This poem goes along with my short You can see it here: . . . Please tell me your thoughts. . . [Edited] -Esther Life is going well for you, ...

I'm Esther and I will be reviewing you today. The first thing I noticed was that your punctuation is somewhat lacking. Normally, I am fine with simple mistakes, but one ...